My main goals are to further develop my thesis, connect my improves thesis to my main points, and support my points with the text. I also want to build an essay with a natural flow and successfully refute counterarguments with a naysayer paragraph.
My main strategy for revision will be to introduce sources effectively then use specific quotes and ideas to support my existing points. To improve flow I can read the text aloud and have others do the same so I can hear how it moves my self. Construction a naysayer paragraph will require me to analyze my own argument for weakness and holes then present and refute said weaknesses effectively.
My largest challenge will be finding the best structure to make my ideas flow smoothly. Also ensuring I properly incorporate and support quotes from the text as I have struggled to do so up to this point. Also, I have failed to format correctly in the past so this is something I should be mindful of.
If I have a challenge too great I can seek further help from peers, consult with my professor for guidance on how to reach my goals. SASC is also an option if I feel I need writhing support.
Great. I’m happy that you went back and completed this. I’ll mark it in the book! 🙂